PatrickGibb

Thank you so much Twinkle :P I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it, I really appreciate you reviewing it for me.

Thank you for your review MTB, I apologise about the gap, but I want you you to know that in Microsoft Word (Which I use for writing) I leave another ...

haha, Amethyst, I really appreciate you reading both of these chapters, and am very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for feedback, it means a lot and helps a lot, ...

Thank you for your review LoveLace, I see now that I might be alone in wanting to perfectly picture the world. I'll be sure to remember this advice when writing. ...

Sushi, I really appreciate you reviewing this, and I will have you know, I have already edited the jump between The Tractor and the mountain climbers. Thank you very much ...

Thanks T.J :P I'll inform you when I've finished editing the next chapter, and have posted it.

Twinkle, I can't thank you enough for your feedback, you have no idea how much it means to me. I really, really appreciate you reading it. I will take your ...