PatriciaTina

Hi! I was wondering if I could get a review. The link is: It's for school, and I really need tips on how to improve it. Thank you so so ...

Wow! I love it! Well, since you've done such an awesome job, I probably won't have that much to comment on, but I'll try! Here it goes. Well, except her ...

I really liked your poem, even though I am a twilight fan. I totally agree that she is so annoying! Like, Midnight Sun would have probably been at least a ...

Bone watched Almond’s shoes disappear through the window, and started climbing. She hoisted herself through the opening and looked around the room. It was completely silent, except for the sound ...

So, first I would like to say that I am really picky when it comes to grammar etc., so beware. :lol: Anyways, here it goes. I froze, and listened with ...

I like it, but i agree, it is a bit fuzzy. I would try downsizing it on an image processing program or something, unless it's originally fuzzy. All in all, ...

Hi! I think that you did a pretty good job with the story, but it's a bit confusing at times. I made Mr. Peterson turn around and stare at the ...

Thanks for being so welcoming! I guess I'll tell you guys a bit more about myself then. Okay, so some of my favorite bands are Paramore, Muse, Relient K and ...

I love this game! Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could ...

Hi! My name is Trish, and I'm new here, as you probably guessed. I love reading, and writing, but I suck at poems. I really like the Twilight series and ...