PatriciaTina

10/10 for Coldplay and Green Day! Awesomeness! 1. Karma Police - Vitamin String Quartet (Originally Radiohead! :D) 2. Rawkfist - Thousand Foot Krutch (Whoot! Turn it up!! Yah!) 3. The ...

Hey there! I haven't read an Artemis Fowl fanfiction in forever! Isn't it such a good book though? But I better get on with the review now. But first, I'll ...

Hey there! Here I am to review, as promised! I'm sorry if I go a little overboard on the nit-picks, but I am seriously a grammar freak. So if I ...

Hey! I don't have what I need reviewed up yet, but when I do, I'll be the first I guess! I'll post the link up here when the story is ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! How are you? I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your chapter today! So let's get started! First, I'll go through some nit-picks and then I'll ...

10/10 for Dani California *SCREAMS!!!!!* and Three Days Grace!!!! Yay! 1. Wish You Well - Thousand Foot Krutch 2. Oh Be Joyful - Matthew Good 3. How I Feel - ...

Hey guys! Thanks so much for reviewing this. I'm sorry it's so rough and short. Just a little update, I'm probably going to either scrap this alltogether, tie it in ...

Hey there! I see that Jet has gone over most of the nit-picks so I'll just go over the overall writing. Also, if I do find anything that Jet hasn't ...

9/10 I don't get it, but it's still cool! :lol:

7/10 Not really my fave bands, but still cool! 1. The Youth - MGMT 2. Collapse (Post-Amerika) - Rise Against 3. Walk Away - Kelly Clarkson 4. Sink Into Me ...

Hi! I just posted a prologue for my new story. It's not that long, but it's a very very rough draft. Please be as harsh as you like! Also, I'm ...

Hey everyone! I just wrote this in about ten minutes, so it's really rough. This is the start of a novel that I'm going to try an finish. I'm really ...

Hey there again! I'm sorry I didn't get here earlier, so I won't be able to give you a full review, but I'll try my best. Sasha and Pink got ...

Hey Jetpack! I really liked this! You did an awesome job with that prompt. There isn't really anything I have to say. But I would like to say that I ...

Hey there! Wow! This is just such an amazing start to your story. I really can't find anything to nit-pick other than the fact that the first paragraph might be ...