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Re: Feeling Unknown
Hey there! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story tonight! Just beware that I'm a grammar freak, so there may be a lot of nit-picks. But let's begin, shall ...
Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:11 am -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.1) [newly edited]
Hey! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story today! It might take a bit for me to get all the way to your fourth chapter, but I'll do them ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:58 pm -
Re: Golden Moon Ch 1 P2
Hey again! As promised, here I am to review your second part! So let's get started, shall we? Nit-Picks I look him straight in the eye, waiting for a denial ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:50 pm -
Re: Golden Moon Ch. 1 P1
Hi! I'm Trish, and I saw that your second part needs reviews, so I thought I better stop over here first before I go review that! So here we go! ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:24 pm -
Re: Flames
Hey! I'm Trish, and I'll be your second reviewer! So let's begin. (Just beware that I'm a grammar freak, so there may be a lot of nit-picks.) But here we ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:32 am -
Re: Suite Life of Z&C --- Dark Intentions - Chapters 1 & 2
Hey again! Sorry it took so long for me to review this, but I got a little sidetracked. But here I am! So let's start, shall we? Nit-Picks Mrs. Thomas ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:01 am -
Re: Breena (Five)
Awesome! It's up! Thanks so much for PMing me about it! :D Hehe. Man, I love this story! Anyways, I'll get on with it now. So here we go! Nit-Picks ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:41 am -
Re: Anyone Need A Review??
Pretty Crazy: Done! :D Come on, people! More! :D ~ Trish :smt006
Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:39 am -
Re: Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers- part 2
Hey again! Here I am to review as promised! So let's get started! :D Nit-Picks The explosion happens right behind us. I close my eyes. I can feel the heat ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:34 am -
Re: Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers
Hey! I usually like to read the beginnings of stories before I read and review the second part, so here I am. I noticed that you don't have any reviews ...
Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:09 am -
Re: Knights of Taldrist-Chapter One-Part Two
Hey again! I'm here to review your second part! So let's get started! Nit-Picks “Anna!” Maryanne called. “Honey, I’m going to get Chinese. You want to come?” Maryanne? Wouldn't she ...
Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:32 pm -
Re: Anyone Need A Review??
Anyone got something? Come on, I need stuff to review! :D ~ Trish :smt006
Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:01 pm -
Re: MissMiaFacinelli's Review Book
I just posted the first part of a story. It's not the same one that I was talking about earlier. This one will be much shorter than that one will ...
Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:59 pm -
Re: The Human Mind - Part One
Fletcher McCarthy glared at the tiny disc of metal that was on his work-table. For years he had been working on this invention, the scattered materials all over the room ...
Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:56 pm -
Re: Luminescence: Part Two - A Twilight Fanfic
Hey again! I'm here to review your second chapter! So here we go! :D Nit-Pick So you think that it would a while at least, to find Mr Right. A ...
Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:29 am