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Re: Return to Reviews
Hey there. It's been a while since I've offered reviews, but hey, now seems like a good time. I'm here to provide reviews of the literary kind to anyone who ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: [September Contest] It's What I Do
Something about your story... I'm not quite sure what it is, but something about it made me feel... disinterested. I couldn't really raise a care for the poor man being ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Playthings [rewritten version]
That was utterly heart rending, but now for a proper review. You set up what seems to be a feel good story, at the start the little girl heading home ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: DOCTOR WHO - Attack of the Time Flies (Parts 1-4)
Ooh, script format, interesting. I'll start off by saying, most of the scripts I'm familiar with work in a different style, that is, they have the speakers name to the ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Postman
I'm not entirely sure what to make of this. Is this awesome? Yes, I would say so. Is it cleverly funny because of how its random? I think so. With ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Coat of Many colors [edited]
Oh boy, lucky you, I'm a reviewer who doesn't particularly like religion... Also, this review will probably be a bit nitpicky. She picked up the lantern I had set beside ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Drop Off Point--Second Part Posted
Hope you don't mind being the guinea pig for my first review. I found your short story very intriguing. The way you write flows very well and progresses smoothly. You've ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: I think you can figure it out
Much appreciated. Poking around I've seen this is a good community to be in. I'll do what I can.
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: I think you can figure it out
Just me introducing myself. Hi, I'm Patch, I'm a seventeen year old person interested in submitting some work to see if I'm up to scratch in the scheme of things. ...
Sep 4, 2008
