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  • Narrative Poetry Re: A fallling love

    I know its short... and kinda random, But for some reason i really love this, Its simple and it gets to the point. Its quite beautiful, :)

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Catching His Eye

    Thanks for the comments, I appreciate them all, And calling it a love poem i would have to disagree and say its more of a heartbreak poem. :P

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Red Heat

    I really liked this alot, ''It was you that I wanted, it was you all along. And now that I’ve had you, it hurts that you’re gone'' These lines are ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost

    I really liked this, It was short however is effective in its purpose. ''What should I do? I'm confused...I think of us and I muse...'' Thats a fantastic part of ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: New Song (acoustic)

    I really liked this, ''We miss our time to cry and tear away our yesterday. And our silence drives away the memories of that ex girlfriend and how shes sleeping ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: On saying good-bye

    I really enjoyed this poem, I think its very intense and your thrown into the scene immediately and out of it again, all in a few lines, and even though ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: ode to an alienated lover

    I definately like this poem, ''When we were young, we fell in love,I, an outcast, and you, the midst of summer's hot, breathy silence,I let you get closer than anyone ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Flow

    I really liked this, I think you have a talent thats only going to get better, & I look forward to seeing what else you put up, :)

    Dec 13, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Catching His Eye

    I saw you quite recently, Infact it was less then a week, Your glistening eyes shone through me, And to me you didn't speak; My eyes shot to the ground ...

    Dec 13, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: My Chemical Romance are back...

    New album out soon, :elephant: Anyone as excited as I am for this? I honestly can not wait. Ive always loved MCR, but i wasn't that impressed with the last ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: You and I

    It is very beautiful, I adore the intensity of it.

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Breaking The Mould.

    Shes Not Normally So Cynical, But Shes Just So Worn Out, For The Things Bestowed Upon Her Heart, Have Filled Her Up With Doubt. In This Abysmal Day And Age, ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hiding The Cracks

    Thank you, This is the first thing ive put up on here apart from an introduction about myself in the About The Authors forum, So im happy people like this, ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To a star

    Oh my goodness... This was beautiful, :)

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hiding The Cracks

    Thank you very much, :)

    Dec 6, 2009


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