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Re: karma
I have karma but at the same time, I also have really good luck. It's partly in response to what I do, but it's also in a part to how ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Try This On For Size
try this on for size all the places that you call home never want you there so your all alone try this on for size all the feelings that you ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Remembering you...
I've felt that way once. I might hav been stupid because the guy only wanted me for my body, but to me that was true love. I wanted him and ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: Death's Dance
Me too. I've been there and still am.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: When The Cheese Attacked.
that is so cool. you're very creative. and imaginative.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Lesser Things
I agree.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Hell Is Other People
I really like the poem. I don't know how to explain it, but I can tell you it was beautiful. Not in the happy fake poem kind of way.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Roses Without Thorns Prologue and Chapter 1
The prologue is really good. And so is the story. But the story is alittle dry in my opinion. Spice it up! Add a problem to it. More energy. I'm ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: The Dawning of Her
Whispers flooding through the walls like fire burning down the forest trees. People running away from something like water flowing over everything in it's path. Who is coming? And why? ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Poetry
look... can you see the red? erase it... you can't. ignore it... you did. change it... already done... i'm gone.
Oct 2, 2008
