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Re: Slamming Doors and Broken Hearts
It was really awesome. You did really good on this. I loved it. However you made one spelling mistake: it’d Other then that you did really good. Don't be so ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: If You Only Knew
If you only knew how much I cried Would you still treat me this way? Would you still hate me? If you only knew how much I'm honest Would you ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: With And Without
Beautiful. Emotionals. Really nice.
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: Enough Already
WOW. You did really good. I mean this was really good. How'd you do that? That was no free writing. Even I don't come up with things that cool. You ...
Oct 14, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
That was so awesome! You know how to write. I mean WOW doesn't even cover it. There are alot of things that I can agree on and I'd like to ...
Oct 14, 2008 -
Re: count your blessings
that's really good.
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: When the world sleeps
nice and it's really cool. don't need any changes to me, but my poems do need help, so if by chance can you check 'em out?
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: The unknown SS man
nice. and that's what'd happen to me.
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: What Is And Was
My heart is heavy My head is light My eyes are wide My mouth is thin. i know how that feels. because i feel it too.
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: My Friend
My friend told me i'm broken glass. but i'm not. My friend told me i'm innocent. but i'm not. My friend loves me...yes she does. but she should not. i'm ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: mania
I like it! You did good. Man if I could express craziness like that then we wouldn't need psychologist poking and probing into situations that they don't belong in. And ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Life Without You
A life without whom? I've become curious. my life without someone like a friend, would be a normal life because i don't have any. So I'll just go with those ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Speechless
I actually think the same way. Because when I thought that I was in love I was wrong. I was so wrong that I ended up getting hurt. Love is ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Love Story
I wish I could be the girl taht fell head over hills with someone and ended up being with them no matter how bad teh Monsters of the Adult Realm ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: I'm here
i think people like you who can actually say that you are here are the best people on the planet. I mean it too. because when i was in a ...
Oct 10, 2008
