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Re: untitled
Wow, you're good. This is so cool. I haven't read a middle age fantasy before because that isn't my thing, but you've caught my attention. I'll be looking forward to ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: He Sits By The Fire
Given to him for Christmas by her, The last one that she was with him. Alittle grammar problems. Other then that everything is going okay. You're doing really good.
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: In My Dreams
Running. Somethings following me. Hiding. I know it sees me. Screaming. There it is, it finaly sees me. Yelling. As it stabs me with it's bloody claws. Falling. There's a ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: If You Only Knew-Revised
If you only knew how much I cried Would you still treat me this way? Would you still hate me? If you only knew how much I'm honest Would you ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
She stands here and waits on the sidewalk of Forth, Wanting so badly her home and its warmth. He's coming, he's coming, she thinks to herself, And yet she is ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: The World is a Liar.
WOW! you are good. nice poem.
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Do you hear me crying?
Wow...if that's real you gotta get outa there. But you did good. Nice format...I like it.
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Two.
Make me choose? I don't think I can. Because neither of you would understand. I don't think I'll ever know what was right to do. But I know that I ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: WOW
that's a...I don't know what to say exactly...But I like it...you're good.
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Angry.
I kick stones as I walk, I choke when I talk, If it didn't hurt ,would punch the wall. I yell out obscenities, I tell you, 'am full of angst, ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Were They By Me?
Swooning around in darkness, Not understanding sex without pain , Continuing to get hurt, Why can't they get enough ? I wait until their done, but the men are never ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Dont Follow Me
needs work? no it doesn't i really liked it. you did good... really good. it was beautiful.
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: For Him Should I Let Go?
That is really beautiful, I think you did really good. It's up to you should you let go, but if you love him hold on as tight as possible. Tomorrow ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: I don't Understand You.
I don't understand you Momma, how could you do this to me? how could you let me be hurt like this? when you knew, when you heard, when I told ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Do You Mind?
I honestly don't know how to respond to that...I mean how am I supposed to respond to that. That poem is...it's just what it is... the truth? A smack in ...
Oct 20, 2008
