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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: untitled

    Wow, you're good. This is so cool. I haven't read a middle age fantasy before because that isn't my thing, but you've caught my attention. I'll be looking forward to ...

    Nov 4, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: He Sits By The Fire

    Given to him for Christmas by her, The last one that she was with him. Alittle grammar problems. Other then that everything is going okay. You're doing really good.

    Nov 4, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In My Dreams

    Running. Somethings following me. Hiding. I know it sees me. Screaming. There it is, it finaly sees me. Yelling. As it stabs me with it's bloody claws. Falling. There's a ...

    Nov 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If You Only Knew-Revised

    If you only knew how much I cried Would you still treat me this way? Would you still hate me? If you only knew how much I'm honest Would you ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Untitled

    She stands here and waits on the sidewalk of Forth, Wanting so badly her home and its warmth. He's coming, he's coming, she thinks to herself, And yet she is ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The World is a Liar.

    WOW! you are good. nice poem.

    Oct 24, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Do you hear me crying?

    Wow...if that's real you gotta get outa there. But you did good. Nice format...I like it.

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Two.

    Make me choose? I don't think I can. Because neither of you would understand. I don't think I'll ever know what was right to do. But I know that I ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: WOW

    that's a...I don't know what to say exactly...But I like it...you're good.

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Angry.

    I kick stones as I walk, I choke when I talk, If it didn't hurt ,would punch the wall. I yell out obscenities, I tell you, 'am full of angst, ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Were They By Me?

    Swooning around in darkness, Not understanding sex without pain , Continuing to get hurt, Why can't they get enough ? I wait until their done, but the men are never ...

    Oct 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dont Follow Me

    needs work? no it doesn't i really liked it. you did good... really good. it was beautiful.

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For Him Should I Let Go?

    That is really beautiful, I think you did really good. It's up to you should you let go, but if you love him hold on as tight as possible. Tomorrow ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I don't Understand You.

    I don't understand you Momma, how could you do this to me? how could you let me be hurt like this? when you knew, when you heard, when I told ...

    Oct 20, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Do You Mind?

    I honestly don't know how to respond to that...I mean how am I supposed to respond to that. That poem is...it's just what it is... the truth? A smack in ...

    Oct 20, 2008


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov