Passion

The over all poem was good. It's just the end rhyming was too much. Or so I thought, there are those who use them freely. It did work in the ...

Home is just around the corner You should have put it like this: Home, is just around the corner You have a bigger effect when you can see a pause ...

Bravo Scarlett! I like the poem. That could be a life poem for many. Keep it goin chicka!

I don't know what to say. There are some grammar errors, but every one has them, watch out for cutting off sentences and such like that. Punctuation can be a ...

Are you sure you're 12? Wow, that's actually amazing what you've written. You should definitly keep up with your writing because you have a natural talent. And take pride in ...

That's exactly how I feel! Man school is so boring and meaningless sometimes, but I do need it for my future. We all need it and don't even know it ...

Oh wow, that poem was too funny. It had a nice flow and played nice on humor. I couldn't stop laughing throughout it. I got my sister to read it ...

Good wording, it was really good wording. And I think there are people that would run with you too, for freedom, but also for love.

Oh wow! That was actually funny at the end. I thought it was about some guy (as did my sister) and yet it was about the internet. Way to show ...

Wow BeeBeeBB, you have a very heart felt poem right there. As me and my sister were reading it we couldn't believe that you were only FOURTEEN. You have a ...

I actually like both of your posts, Jas, I didn't even notice that I used "one" and not "on" thanks for pointing that out. I should definitely proofread things more ...

I'm not sure if this goes here, it's been a while since I've posted but here it is. The Prodigy Water from the river flowing quickly Moving so fast with ...

I don't think your poem is bad at all, I actually like it. Small, simple, but also makes you want to see the hourglass for all its glory no matter ...

The air is thick with temptation she feels it flowing through her veins sharp and pure. Her stomach twists, her lips forming a thin line where they meet. Something's either ...

Isn't this a very emotional poem. to have and hold. I like it.