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Re: I Am Wind
I am wind. Moving so swiftly accross the world, Imprinting who I am everywhere I go. I am wind. You see me in different seasons, Acting so animatedly, Dancing all ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Dear Momma
Awwww thank you all for your comments I look forward to seeing more and more corrections on my word :D I'm so loving all the feedback!
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: There's A Whole Where Your Name Should Be
I am content in how these came out, they were much better than what I thought they'd be. I'm glad for that too.
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Dear Momma
Dear Mama, How much regret is too much regret? How many times do I say "I wish"? Would you listen to me if I told you my mistakes? Give me ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Embracing Summer
That is absolutely adorable! I'm sorry but it is so cute. And it's amazing. You have skill. It flowed, and it had music to it. Like a very relaxing note ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: There's A Whole Where Your Name Should Be
Hahahaha thank you :D It's okay really, it is a bit sad, but at the same time, not having my dad in my life gave me the ability to write ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: There's A Whole Where Your Name Should Be
Daddy, There's a hole in my heart. One right where your name should be. And those experiences that should have been but never were, I've missed out haven't I? I ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Rewind Button
If life had a rewind button give me two To rewind until there was no me and you I'd use the first one to take away those days of passion ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Could It Be...
*blush* Awww thank you guys! It's been such a while since I've even added poetry on here, I'm glad that I've broke my posting fast and had so many great ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Could It Be...
I had my mind set on something A dream that now seems so far out of my reach So far that it's out of my eyesight Out of my hearing ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: A Kiss Without Lips
Thank you all for you responses, I was actually very nervous about posting this one. I thought it was going to be another mushy-gushy poem. One of the regular poems ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: A Kiss Without Lips
You reach for me But even your long arms aren't Close enough to grab hold Instead they miss me Barely scratch the surface of who I am And who I'm ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: The World Is My Playground
The world is my playground For me to learn new things And explore myself To understand the world And hear the music Oh the world is my playground I cannot ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Down In The Deep
Dang... I don't know what to say. That's a beautiful poem. It was very...I don't know. It was amazing.
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: A Callous Answer
I thought that was funny! You did good on it. There are tidbits of grammar problems, like where you should have added an "s" but you didn't. It confused me ...
Jul 28, 2011
