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Kamas, thank you.

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I drink alone. Though intriguing as a first line, it only accomplishes being intriguing. It doesn't have much point to it otherwise because you restate it last line (which is ...

There is little if not simply nothing that makes this special. If you're going to preech, preech without the forced rhymes. Preech without calling this a poem or telling anyone ...

You know, I always thought Judas was fabulous because he was such a dynamic character. I could empathize with him and also dislike him when he sold his buddy Jesus, ...

With Nightshade on the French restaurant, however the importance of what kind of restaurant it is I feel is negligible. It is interesting. It has a Bukowski grittiness to it, ...

Yes, the three words per line did disrupt the flow--chock it up to the piss poor enjambment your adherence to the three words per line limits you to. severe passion ...

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Hey boo. We need to talk, see. It's about this poem you wrote. Just today I had the displeasure of incredible insult when I, discussing the process of writing poetry ...

Have you read the Passover Plot? Probably not, but it claims that Jesus was a false prophet. That he was a genius young man who "adhered" to texts telling of ...

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Must be honest: this poem did not read to me like a serious poem might read. This has the same flow to it as this children's book I used to ...

This is a meditation on your piece. Hope it's not too harsh. This is a meditation... x4. I can only say "how dull". It becomes dreary and the kind of ...

Many thanks BadlyDrawnLightning. Celebratory elephants. It's a fun idea I guess. Oh. Ok. Got it. I settle into consistency every so often. Actually I hoped this place would help me ...

Rosey: I wouldn’t think of hesitating. After all, you do have the down low…unless someone was making a joke at your expense. Heh. Persephoneia: Erm, I’m intensely farsighted when it ...