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Thank you guy's for reading it, I really appreciate it. I will fix it up, and I will take all your advise into condiseration when I do. Thanks!!!

That's okay, I need all the help I can get with this. And I am not telling the story in Missy's point of view anymore. Thanks for commenting!

I found this really good. It had lots of depth to it and i found it was written very well. I can relate to it, so it did have some ...

This was nice, I did like it and I know haiku's are suppose to be in the form that you have created. But it was a little bland and you ...

I did like this poem. But maybe you could try to have some stanzas instead of every line being on it's own. And some figurative language would be nice. Like ...

Hey guys, thanks for the great reviews! I know though isn't a very good copy, but I'll be sure to fix it up soon. And I will do some reviews, ...

Thanks!!

Okay, so it is not in Missy's point of view. I hope you all enjoy! Please R&R!! On a rainy day in July 2007 Allison Bradley's life was going to ...

In my country Canada, we have over 2 million dollars of aid material going over there. But, the military over there would not let Red Cross from Canada or the ...

I like this one! I also didn't read all of it (sorry), but I did read most of it and it sounds really good. You written it very well! Can't ...

Thanks guys for the reviews!!!!! I'll be sure to fix the mistakes!!!! - Ellie

Okay, so this is something I started a few days ago. Not that great, but I do like the plot. So if you can, please help!! And these first two ...