Paracosm

Very good! All I caught was in one of the stanzas, you might want to change the second fate to something like destiny. It sounded a bit repetitive. It was ...

Black paints the most colorful sunsets, Speaks the loudest words, Black weaves the most vivid tales, Displays deep emotion, Black surges from page to mind, Gives life to imagination, Black ...

Good job! This was pretty sweet! All I can say is, "What's up?" He said, walking him to me. Sounded like he was walking with someone to her.

This was awesome! I really liked it!

Wow! Your English is better than some American's English! There are no major grammar errors, and you made your point excellently! This is very inspiring!

Awesome job! All I can say is... Maybe add a line to the last stanza? I don't know, you may have done it to portray finality, but still, awesome poem!

Excellent as always! You spelled cauldron wrong, but that's no big deal. And, Caesar loyal to Blackbeard. is a fragment. That's no big deal though. Good job! :)

Excellent! You spelled shining wrong, and I don't know much about poetry, but the Wate' part kind of confused me, I read it was wait. That might just be because ...

All the grammar I can notice is taken, so I guess all I can say is nice job, and I feel for you!

I don't know much about poetry, but I like this! Good job! Although, a flame, can also be aflame. That's all I have, and a flame is really correct too. ...

If you were placed on a desert island, what three things would you take with you?

I wish mine was in a cave like place by a beach house, but it's in literature.

“It’s a form of tonic immobility,” Carson said, running his hand through his hair. “This occurs in small animals, they feign dead so that the predator will not harm them, ...

Could work! Keep fighting and don't give up! God loves you no matter what, you may not have the choice to be gay or lesbian, but you do have the ...

Wow! I loved this, you painted a great image. Maybe you should just add a bit more color to the description? It was great, but if you were to write ...