Paracosm

I'm going to say a word, tell me the first thing that pops into your head! Kumquat!

Wow! This was haunting from the very beginning! You did a great job describing the scenes in a semi-confusing style. It felt like something was going to happen, and it ...

I liked this poem! It was very well written, but the last stanza feels off to me. I would try to use the word you a little less, but it's ...

Pine Tree Haiku Elegant pine trees Sway in the calm winter wind, they are calm and quiet

Before you read on, this is not based on western demons. My story is based on the eastern idea of demons, also known as Yokai. The Kanji for Yokai are ...

Under the Weather Here in the west the dust is as common as ants, Whenever it sweeps over our home it's like a hot breath, from the devil's own lungs, ...

This reminded me of Robert Frost. It was the pattern behind it I think... I'm not really sure why. I liked this poem! It was nice and simple, but really ...

This was great! It was full of emotion, the thought was expressed well, and it was very edgy. The whole story is full of angst. I just don't get the ...

Wang Wei Zhang heaved his back pack over his shoulder as he stepped off the bus. He road a separate bus from his friends, so the morning ride to school ...

This was very good! “Where the hell have you been?” She ducked into the alley. -This might sound better if you say something along the lines of: "Where the hell ...

That was completely mind blowing! I really liked the climatic ending! There weren't any rhythm issues or grammar issues that I noticed. I think this is free verse, and that's ...

This was really great! You did a good job being indirect, everyone knows he killed himself, but you never just say out right. I wish we knew the main character's ...

I liked this as well! Towards the end the flow feels off to me. So I jump, my life flashing (flashes maybe?) before my eyes, as they say it always ...

I really liked this poem! There was a minor typo in the third stanza. Never knowing what I what (want), or when I want it I didn't get the third ...

I liked the way the poem was written, I just disagree with the point, but, no matter! Why was the last line in the second stanza in parentheses? Just curious!