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The Unicorn Forgot Happiness Alongside Batman Single horn above the bridge, what magic flies within your curvature? Sooth my wound gaping in metaphysical realms: aching to embrace your abrasive cloven

And a tree in town square. Not a snowflake insight. Except out a can. - I don't feel that this stanza should start with And. Palm Trees with twinkling lights ...

Hopeless

Unfortunately the bird is sucked up into a jet engine and causes a massive crash.

WritteinInStone I'll give you a... 7/10. Some of that just isn't my taste, but I like the piano in Set Fire to the Rain. I'll listen to Adele, but... meh. ...

The secret to great writing is great editing- Rob Hadley (That's quoted a bit roughly I think, but that's the jest of it!) You're writing for you, and not anyone ...

I enjoy writing mystery!

Hey! Thanks for reading! This is a work in progress, so it's not finished. I just needed to know how you guys felt about the atmosphere of the story! January ...

Great job! This going to go somewhere great! Maybe you could have her put under investigation for murder, that would be exciting. Would she run and hide, or try and ...

Great job! This going to go somewhere great! Maybe you could have her put under investigation for murder, that would be exciting. Would she run and hide, or try and ...

This is a good poem, and I'm glad you found God! Here's all I noticed! All I know is that when darkness is all you have, it becomes a close ...

Chapter 1 Frost stiffened grass crunched under Christian Demicco’s feet as he proceeded up the steep hill after a small rest from climbing. His lungs were burning from the cold ...

Wow! This is brimming with awesomeness! I didn't notice much to complain about. All I can say is that I have trouble differentiating between so many characters introduced from the ...

Hey there! I thought for the most part that this was well written, there are some sentences I've picked out that may not necessarily have grammar errors, but that I ...

The man with no name, no family, no ties, and no identifiable features lay on the hospital bed, feeling as though he was about to freeze to death. He tried ...