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Re: Dear Lucy
I thought this was deep. I liked it. The paragraph in the "Dear Lucy" letter was very unsettling and very IN YOUR FACE. which i didn't expect in this. Other ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: My Last Thoughts
This was written beautifully but the only thing i wish you could've done was write more about who Carly was... Maybe have the main character recall events or memories or ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: His Name Was Joel
I liked this... it was unexpected at the end. Somehow i kind of got lost in the middle but other than that, it was well written! (: keep it up.
Jan 2, 2011