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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear Lucy

    I thought this was deep. I liked it. The paragraph in the "Dear Lucy" letter was very unsettling and very IN YOUR FACE. which i didn't expect in this. Other ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Last Thoughts

    This was written beautifully but the only thing i wish you could've done was write more about who Carly was... Maybe have the main character recall events or memories or ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: His Name Was Joel

    I liked this... it was unexpected at the end. Somehow i kind of got lost in the middle but other than that, it was well written! (: keep it up.

    Jan 2, 2011


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon