PaperNessa

We must be something like stars,or a starburst. Blinking and growinguntil we tear ourselves apartso much faster then we should.Some would admire us from afar,streamlined us through a telescopebefore w

I thought this was deep. I liked it. The paragraph in the "Dear Lucy" letter was very unsettling and very IN YOUR FACE. which i didn't expect in this. Other ...

How does someone come up with things like this? I really liked this. At first when i read the beginning i was thinking, "Oh great, another story about rejection." but ...

Just as I am about to give in, to let go, and stop fighting,I see light. More radiant and incandescent than the light of the world. Your light guides me.Your ...

This was written beautifully but the only thing i wish you could've done was write more about who Carly was... Maybe have the main character recall events or memories or ...

I liked this... it was unexpected at the end. Somehow i kind of got lost in the middle but other than that, it was well written! (: keep it up.

He sat across the street with his grey beard on the park bench without saying a word. I didn’t know who the man was or what he was doing there. ...

my names Nessa, haaha anyways, Wow, this is really deep. I immediately fell in love with this as soon as i read it. Idk how the points/rating or whatever works ...