PaperNessa

this haiku made me think a little. I had to read it a few times to actually figure out it was talking about a fox. (besides the giveway title). I ...

This was very fun and mysterious to read. At first i was thinking, "whats coming after her?" and then the message at the end was very unanticipated. I liked this ...

hmmm this was interesting for me to read. I dont quite get what's going on. Is it just a chat about something random or does it have a greater meaning? ...

hey, i liked this poem!! out of five, i give it a four. it wasn't very deep but it was insightful. i normally dont do suggestions for the whole thing ...

THREE WORDS: THIS WAS AMAZING!! yess i loved this. keep it up. the day has stopped,so useless I feel,I don't have the power to help.The selfishness of us humans doesn't ...

hmm i liked this. was this based off of harry potter? who is Lilly Evans? i'm sorry, I haven't read the books at all. this wasn't very deep. it seemed ...

I see the way your eyes light up like that, Sparkling through the night. I wasn't there to witness it, but stories travel fast. I can't figure it out, why ...

wow i liked this a lot! (: it was really good. it was deep and descriptive and maybe you could add more about what happened before she ascended into heaven ...

Three Words: This was interesting. Im not sure if this is what you want to do before you die or if this was written in the point of view of ...

whoa, i thought this was very interesting. I dont quite understand what a "broken table" is, well, i didnt know if there was a greater meaning. this poem seemed like ...

umm, i liked this. it was sweet and sounded nice. only thing: I miss knowing you were only a walk away. i dont think that really made sense. maybe it ...

i really liked the way this poem flowed. i liked the whole "lonliness" thing since it fit when eventually the main character was pulled out of the slump. i have ...

Ellie approached Travis with caution in the summer heat. They were on the beach away from all of the noisy people on the other side of the beach. The warm ...

haaha wow i wasn't expecting the ending but it made sense. I liked the poem. (: good job

Wow i really thought this was great. This deep and meaningful and now im going to start thinking about my dreams whenever i wake up. keep this going, i LOVED ...