PaperNessa

just to clarify things, there are different people when i used the different pronouns, "I", "he" and "you" and "she" they are all different people so be aware of this ...

AWW this was sooo cute!! haaha i loved this! it was great. out of five, i give it a four! keep writing. however, these are my suggestions but it's pretty ...

errmmm why would you even put this on YWS ? but haha no just kidding! (: it was cute and VERY, VERY, VERY random. i mean - cheese? maybe you ...

Wow this was interesting/exciting but confusing/strange at the same time. I enjoyed reading! keep it up! i liked it but is there a plot? the only thing i had understanding ...

I thought this was interesting. This was chapter 1, and this is the first i have read of this (if its a novel/novella/short story). In the beginning it is very ...

Please don't tell me this doesn't make sense. Just read it and find your own meaning. (: thank you. Review me and tell me what you think it means. The ...

WOW, i know a lot(: update your post to add all of the comments before me! BEFORE you read this list, please know that i have younger siblings (as well ...

hmm... wow this was deeper than i expected. haaha, i liked it. A LOT. rating out of five: four. here are my suggestions: Words, terrible words, flashed in my mind ...

AWESOME, i loved this. it was great. It wasn't every descriptive (but who cares, right?) rating out of five: four. this was mysterious and very strange in a good way. ...

hmm this was different.

WWWOOOWWW. I LIKED THIS A LOT! haaha, anyways i liked the ending the best, these are my suggestions: Your embrace warms me from the ravaging wind, but it doesn’t do ...

I like this a lot. out of five it give it a four. (: good job keep writing!! there weren't many mistakes grammar wise; which was good but only one ...

this was good. i enjoyed reading it... not many mistakes: Dear Connor, We’ve argued about many things in the past. They’re stupid things; things that don’t even mean anything to ...

I wrote this really quick because i wanted to post something. I figured this would be good to post. It progresses really quickly so please review and tell me what ...

i liked this. i thought it was interesting. the way the main character (sorry i forgot her name) was stealing and she was also having visions of her past by ...