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PaperNessa

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  • Welcome Mat Re: New to YWS

    Hello! Welcome and feel free to bother the ones who have been here for quite a while. We don't mind.

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Is Religion Evil?

    It's all up to the person and their decision on what to believe. If one were to blatantly state: "no, it's not evil because this, this, and this", then that ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Green Eyes

    All I think of, All I dream of, Is the way you captured me, And how I shattered you. I'll run towards you, I step back. You don't recieve the ...

    Nov 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart

    I liked this... It was very good. I had no idea that "IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart" would all stand for something. I loved the way it was written. The whole thing gave an ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Need You.

    This poem was somewhat confusing, or I could tell the writer was confused when writing this. It was simple, short, and conflicting -- I liked it. Good job! There were ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: And so I write.

    Best. Poem. Ever. Keep writing. I'm glad you write! I wouldn't change anything in this poem, it is too beautiful. The explaination on why you still write, a look at ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Crimson Radiance

    I thought it was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading all of it. It sounded very romantic. Your word choice was alright, you could've added larger, more explanitory words, but ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Long Cold Stare

    I liked this poem because it sounded cold-hearted, saddening, hardening, and lonely. (well, that's the why I interpreted it). I enjoyed reading. I didn't see any mistakes. It was well ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Impossible

    hmm this was very confusing. I didn't understand but I read this a few times and began to put together my interpretation of the poem. I liked it; it was ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Can I Be Alex

    She runs through your mind, I can tell she meant the world to you. She imprinted your brain, with poisonous lies. I wish I could've known her, I wish I ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The way she makes me feel.

    Hmm you seem like a nice guy. I liked this... It was sweet, beautiful, and touching. The similies were amazing. Even though some of the poem was repetive, it proved ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Temptation

    Beautiful is all I can say. Eyes burning, Heads turning, You won't ever know. You look at the world with eyes glowing. You love life with your mind all-knowing. The ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Keys

    This is very short and obvious, but I haven't written anything in four months so... review it(: thanks. *NOTE* many think this is not easy to understand and does not ...

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Little Lucifer

    Hmm I thought this was a very interesting poem. It explained a lot of things without saying much. Each line interested me more about the two people. The girl, of ...

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple

    haaha i liked this poem a lot (: it sounded like Dr. Seuss!! what does rhyme with purple ? uhmm glurple ? that sounds right. anyways, i enjoyed this. it ...

    Feb 11, 2011


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