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Re: New to YWS
Hello! Welcome and feel free to bother the ones who have been here for quite a while. We don't mind.
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: Is Religion Evil?
It's all up to the person and their decision on what to believe. If one were to blatantly state: "no, it's not evil because this, this, and this", then that ...
Jan 18, 2015 -
Re: Green Eyes
All I think of, All I dream of, Is the way you captured me, And how I shattered you. I'll run towards you, I step back. You don't recieve the ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart
I liked this... It was very good. I had no idea that "IfTonyBlairToldTheTruthForOneDayOurWorldWouldFallApart" would all stand for something. I loved the way it was written. The whole thing gave an ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Need You.
This poem was somewhat confusing, or I could tell the writer was confused when writing this. It was simple, short, and conflicting -- I liked it. Good job! There were ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: And so I write.
Best. Poem. Ever. Keep writing. I'm glad you write! I wouldn't change anything in this poem, it is too beautiful. The explaination on why you still write, a look at ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Crimson Radiance
I thought it was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading all of it. It sounded very romantic. Your word choice was alright, you could've added larger, more explanitory words, but ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: The Long Cold Stare
I liked this poem because it sounded cold-hearted, saddening, hardening, and lonely. (well, that's the why I interpreted it). I enjoyed reading. I didn't see any mistakes. It was well ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: The Impossible
hmm this was very confusing. I didn't understand but I read this a few times and began to put together my interpretation of the poem. I liked it; it was ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Can I Be Alex
She runs through your mind, I can tell she meant the world to you. She imprinted your brain, with poisonous lies. I wish I could've known her, I wish I ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: The way she makes me feel.
Hmm you seem like a nice guy. I liked this... It was sweet, beautiful, and touching. The similies were amazing. Even though some of the poem was repetive, it proved ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Temptation
Beautiful is all I can say. Eyes burning, Heads turning, You won't ever know. You look at the world with eyes glowing. You love life with your mind all-knowing. The ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Keys
This is very short and obvious, but I haven't written anything in four months so... review it(: thanks. *NOTE* many think this is not easy to understand and does not ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Hmm I thought this was a very interesting poem. It explained a lot of things without saying much. Each line interested me more about the two people. The girl, of ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
haaha i liked this poem a lot (: it sounded like Dr. Seuss!! what does rhyme with purple ? uhmm glurple ? that sounds right. anyways, i enjoyed this. it ...
Feb 11, 2011
