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Thank thank thank! I'm glad the explanation here came off okay because "okay I gotta explain everything now" is EXACTLY what was going through my head at this point. I'm ...

I feel like in the next draft I might just collapse all of the explanations into one scene??? Or maybe Not, but I'll at least try make them less repetitive. ...

Yeah, I think you've got that right. I feel like I'm in a real slump and I just need to explain stuff but it's not happening right. How ever , ...

Ahhhh - that memory thing does make sense, but it's definitely something you should clarify. Maybe rather than just using 'she' in the memory scenes, actually use Cass's name occasionally? ...

Re: Hildegarde feeling sick or numb, Yeah, I totally need to vary my descriptors more. XD Think of them as placeholders for now, but thanks for pointing it out. Of ...

I'm givin' nothing away because I don't want to give you any more spoilers. All I'll say is that...uh...Daisy can be an idiot too. That's all. Thanks for catching up ...

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THAT MAKES ME

Thanks for this!! The anticlimactic thing is useful to know about, because obviously I want to do a bit of a switcheroo with people and take them by surprise, but ...

Fixed it for you. And muhahaha, I've been waiting to shock everyone with this reveal. >:3 The next part of this chapter will deliver a proper explanation, but I didn't ...

Ah, okay - that's helpful! :)

Thanks very much for this! Everything you've said makes complete sense. I think in draft two of Posies I'll definitely see about making a more defined regimen for Hildegarde and ...

Thanks! I'm still finding these reviews useful, but big stuff is due to change and happen starting from chapter 15, so hopefully that will give you more to talk about! ...

Thanks! Yeah, I don't think degas make up a particularly large amount of the ruling class - they're still definitely a minority. It's just that pretty much every degas comes ...

Thanks!! Hilde's personality is a perpetual enigma to deal with. When I redraft this, I'll definitely see about having her feisty side flare up more, because I know it's faded ...

Thanks so much, Sins! And I do completely take your point about waiting for 'something' to happen. Drama is coming (my god, it is definitely coming) but one of the ...