Panikos

Not yet professional, but thank you ever so much! :)

Thanks for this! This is definitely a scene I'll rewrite from scratch in the next draft, because I feel like it should've been much calmer than it is. I think ...

Thank you for the review!! It's great to know that this chapter gripped you even without context. It would be awesome if you wanted to read this story from the ...

The main thing I didn't like about this chapter is Mr Atkinson's character, precisely because he treats Hildegarde in a way that would set off even the most naive kid's ...

(I totally didn't get a notif for this. Classic yws) Thanks for all this! I deffo think this first draft is going to end up way on the long side ...

That's the plan :P

Also, sidenote: hearing that you love Daisy's character warms my heart. I remember back when she was first introduced, you called her a 'bad egg' in one of your reviews. ...

So wonderful to get reviews from you again!!! I must admit, for all of the hiccups with this draft, I do feel incredibly lucky because some of the plotlines have ...

More like have to. A lot has happened xD

OKAY THIS BOY'S TOTALLY GOING TO REAPPEAR, RIGHT? BECAUSE I LOVE HIM ALREADY HE'S DEFINITELY GOING TO SHOW UP AGAIN!! I haven't FULLY figured out his role yet but I've ...

Oh, Vie would definitely want to do things Properly in any other circumstances. She's a stickler and a traditionalist most of the time, buuuuuuut.......all she really cares about at the ...

*Hildegarde is an un usual case, I meant to say

Okay, this is such a ridiculous statement, but the way I read it in my head Hildegarde says it 100% normally and matter-of-factly and that makes it all the more ...

I think the whole 'previous monarchs have done bad things' could work, especially if the emphasis is on the fact that Kartiel has not denounced their actions and continues to ...

*why he stole Daisy, I mean. That would be a VERY different plot.