Panikos

I think I've miscommunicated here - it's not that Daisy had no idea that degas existed, it's just kind of been in the back seat because it was never a ...

Honestly thank you for asking questions like that because it really makes me think and put more detail into the magic system! Your comments and reviews in general always seem ...

Okay I can FINALLY respond to your questions 1) Does a frame need to be used to trigger the conditions into being 'active'? The answer to this would honestly depend ...

Thank you for the review and these WONDERFUL questions about the magic system which I will answer the moment I'm back at my computer and not on mobile (because hoo ...

Ah I see!

What book is that?

Louise! :) and I'm glad you like him!

To be fair, the magic didn't specifically tell them to befriend a bird, just get it to trust them, which I think is slightly different. That SAID, crows are pretty ...

Thanks! Yep, I definitely overuse the cutting-off thing - it's a real writing tic of mine. I'll try and cut down on it when I get to editing! :)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I really wanted to get the chance to show a vulnerable side to Vie, because for all she's the ...

I promise there'll be more hands-on magic stuff in the next chapter! It's just because she's not really found anything proper yet so she's just, like, stacking cards and trying ...

Haha, Paris isn't married xD it's just a snarky comment from Daisy because Hildegarde was being all 'why do you spend so much time with him'. I can see the ...

*star, rather! xD

Thanks, Liberty! Just to mention, a few of the spelling mistakes you pointed out are actually just US/UK differences - we spell 'jewelled' differently in the UK, and we tend ...

Thanks Zoom! This is super helpful. I definitely agree that the second scene would work better if it started from Daisy's perspective, so I'll make that change in editing. I'll ...