Panikos

Thanks so much!!! I really hope it inspires you to pick up your own project. Re Hildegarde picking the lock slowly: she kind of craves the chance of getting in ...

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Thank you! :D

Thank you! :)

Thanks so much for this, Mea! It's really useful. I'll fix the head-hopping at some point, but that's one of those mistakes I'm very prone to in early drafts so ...

Thank you!!

Thanks so much! :D

THANK YOU. I'm so glad the degas thing worked because that was the bit I was most worried about. Everybody knows about them, but they're kind of this weird elephant ...

Thanks so much! The repetition of the analogy was actually deliberate, because it's a metaphor for her future, but maybe I'm trying to be too fancy haha. Thanks for the ...

You're welcome! Glad it helped. :)

*MANIC EVIL CACKLING*

Yay!

Thank you! This is really reassuring because the whole story is giving me a lot of grief.

Thanks so much!!

You're welcome! Yeah, don't worry about changing stuff straight away - I agree, that's what second drafts are for. :)