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THANK YOU! Also, it said in the last chapter that Hildegarde is 12, but I'm just like....constantly uncertain of how to write children?? I want her to come across like ...

Thanks a million! This is such a helpful review, as always. And your last comments have been making me think about ideas I hadn't considered - though maybe not in ...

Thanks so much! This really helps. Hildegarde's behaviour is really hard to pitch in this chapter because it's like she DOES care what people - and Thelsadore - think about ...

My argument to point two would be that unspecific words still exist for a reason. Why is it bad to have a word that can be used for many different ...

I'm glad you liked it. :) I don't think it helps that swearing is such a vast and multifaceted issue. It's not easy to explore thoroughly in one short article!

Thanks so much! :D

It does sound like a cooler and more suspenseful way of telling the story, to be honest. And you know everyone's always keen for More Kiernan Content

Thanks Demeter! I'm glad Hildegarde's fear came across. I was worried that her obnoxiousness would make it seem like she was fine with everything, even though it's more like she's ...

I didn't realise the second chapter was up! I think I was on holiday when it was posted. I'll review it as soon as I can.

Thanks for this! Yeah, I'm going to try and slip in at some point before that dialogue that the secretary is wearing heels, because I felt it came a bit ...

Thank you thank you thank you! I'm squealing right now. Regarding Dante, I wrote this entire thing and then realised he didn't say a single word throughout, so I'll fix ...

Thanks so much!! :D

Thanks so much! The next bit will go up tomorrow. :D

Thanks so much! Yeah, I think 'creating' might just be English, because Biscuits is Scottish and they didn't recognise it. Maybe it's a bit archaic, as well - it's not ...

It's really useful to have another reader who hasn't read anything about the plot summary. Re: degas - they're not servants, and they are supposed to mysterious. You'll find out ...