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Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 29.2
Hiya, Querencia! Just dropping in for another review. I'm steadily trying to get up to date with all of the novels I'm following. He was losing his patience very quickly ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica! I'm up to date again! Hallelujah! Small Comments No mean feat, since there was a lot of it and it tasted like kale had decided to run away ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 34.2
Hiya, BlueAfrica! I'm here to watch you see Hamilton through your characters' eyes. What is writing for if not that? Small Comments The elf laughed shortly. “My funding fell through. ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 34.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica! Don't mind if I slide on in and fry up another review. Small Comments “I’m half-fae,” she said as a tiny gingko tree sprouted from the mossy floor ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: thoughts well-worn
Hi, alliyah! Pan dropping in to fulfil your long-ago review request. Sorry it's taken so long to get round to this - life's just been a bit hectic. I'll try ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 33.2
Hiya, BlueAfrica! Pan dropping in for another review. It sucks to hear you were so poorly when you wrote this - but you stayed in the competition, so congrats for ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 33.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica! Pan dropping in for another review. Small Comments “Benjamin?” Edna croaked, and opened her eyes. For a moment, she had a blurry view of the hangings of a ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami
Hiya, Lightsong! Finally I can get round to reviewing this for you. As usual, small grammatical or phrasing corrections will be shown in blue . Small Comments Still, she didn’t ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 32.2
Hiya, BlueAfrica! It's been too long. I need to scramble to catch up with this again! Small Comments Just exercising, despite the fact that the lot of them looked far ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 29
Yoo, Querencia! Sorry it's been so long. Uni has relinquished its grip on me so I'm trying to slide back into my old reviewing routine. She’d let Dr. Lark stay ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Devil's Disguise Chapter 2
Hi again, maishaywca! Pan back to review. Same format as last time. I'll start by reading through the piece and drawing attention to smaller issues, then finish off with my ...
Apr 16, 2018 -
Re: Devil's Disguise Chapter 1
Hiya, maishaywca! I'm here to review as promised. As this is a pretty short piece, I'm just going to read through it and comment on the story as I go ...
Apr 13, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 28.2
Hiya, Querencia! Pan dropping in to review. Still, he ran on through the neighborhood, cars and houses passing in a blur of meaningless color. He couldn’t believe that his mother ...
Apr 10, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 28.1
Hiya, Querencia. Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. The reviewing fatigue has been kicking in a bit lately. Dr. Lark. Finnley thought he’d left her behind ...
Apr 9, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 32.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica. Dropping in for another review. Small Comments You’d think a flying carpet would make navigating easier, give you a bird’s-eye view of your route, but it didn’t. Just ...
Apr 9, 2018
