PanicAndFlee

I’m sailing out of control, In your blue ocean eyes, There is so much to love, But more to despise. They are calming and tranquil, But with one gust of ...

Night after lonely night. I stare at the flickering lights Of my computer screen. Very strong intro. It pulled me right in! :] My mind drifts into hollow places Dark, ...

If you fall for this man will you love me? This line seemed kind of out of place in my opinion. Otherwise I liked it alot. It made me feel ...

The last two lines amazed me. I normally don't like very short poems, but this was good. However, I think the 4th line sounds kind of strange. Idiotic just doesn't ...

Why won’t you just let me go? Without each other we’ll be fine. And don’t think that I don’t know, You’ve begun to like someone else in time. You tell ...

Why won’t you just let me go? Without each other we’ll be fine. And don’t think that I don’t know, You’ve begun to like someone else in time. You tell ...

Now that I look back at the photos where my sister and I are wearing identical outfits, I can laugh at the pain that I once endured. Surely I never ...

AMAZING. My favourite is the man on the cold morning walk. It's amazing. It's perfectly foggy. Good eye! :]

Ahh, this is great. The lines "we must laugh, and smile, pretending not to feel" really spoke to me. Also, the empty ditch of jealousy is such a vivid image. ...

It was all a bit strange. I think you said "tis" too much, even though you probably did it purposely. This part also sounded odd because you end both lines ...

I need to read a novel for this project for English. It needs to be a book that has a lot to be said about it, and I really love ...

I liked it for the most part, but I agree with the other "reviewers" that some rhymes sound forced. But I really liked the part: Use words like ‘scars’ and ...

Hahaha, I really enjoyed this. I laughed throughout, and I thought it was really cute. Good job :]

Thanks a lot for reviewing my story, I'm glad you liked it. I'll take what you said into consideration :] I actually wrote this for a writing class of mine ...

Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D