PanicAndFlee

I am in LOVE... With this poem that is. It's not really going to help you with your writing, but hopefully it'll make you more confident! "The box you hide ...

You, the Arsonist The writing exercise in front of the class concerns a pile of leaves depressed and repressed I like your choice of words! stricken from nature and laid ...

I like it, it's very unique! I like your style of writing. Like everyone else said, parts confused me. You spoke of white (which I assume is snow) and frigid ...

By request of posting them...;D Moonlight Decision Let's take a walk on the wild side, And forget all others that crossed the tracks. I love the intro! Totally catches your ...

This was entertaining and confusing all at once! It definitely was not a typical poem. I'm a fan of the sad rhyming and gloomy poetry, but this was a nice ...

The blue bird flies Why does it get to fly Why am I stuck in unhappiness When the world comes crashing down Why can't I fly then Why does the ...

Watch the stars by night time and I promise by the day, Is the word "time" neccessary? This one last kiss I will not miss as the sun shine fades ...

Good! I liked it, but it was kind of hard on the eyes to read with all the quotation marks.

I love it!!! The lines: "We were perfect,We were in love.We made mistakes, And we gave up" really spoke to me and I almost got goosebumps! It just shows how ...

Your poem is really neat, I especially liked the layout because it made it a little more exciting to read. Although I wasn't a fan of the surplus of the ...

Hahaha this was great. It was random indeed, but very enjoyable. I love the construction and rhyming. It's very fun and a nice read. Great job.

Good poem! I like the style and construction. Some lines sound very typical such as "Making every nerve in my body tingle" and "Like I’m a worthless piece of trash." ...

I've never been a fan of really repeitive poems. Also, some things you write sound almost cliche... It isn't bad though. Keep up the good work.

If I don’t get what I want, I walk around with rain stained eyes. If I get exactly what I desire, There is still darkness in the sky. I can’t ...

I love this poem. It speaks to me. There is honestly so much emotion in this, I can just feel it... Especially in the lines "I’m dying to know / ...