PandorasChild

Beautiful. Moving. You never fail to impress me. Whenever I read your pieces I feel like I've been swept up into another world. Well done on being awesome :)

Hey, Listen, this was stunning. So beautiful. Ive read it about three times now, even aloud, and its amazing. It needs a better word.. I cant find it.. but its ...

manpudding!!! you are now my all time favourite writer :) :) i loved this!! your crazy little awesome imagination is pure genius!! DONT EVER STOP WRITING :)

Hey Lily :) I enjoyed the story, and the idea, but it is very very descriptive. If that was your objective, then very very well done. Although, if you intend ...

Why hello there :) Firstly, 'Shred it to pieces' is just so harsh ;) I think most of us understand what its like to post those pieces that aren't the ...

why hello there :) I really liked this piece. Your characters were amazing, especially Ashley. You introduced her so well, firstly with the picture, and secondly in your opening paragraph ...

kelle, this poem was amazing. It has touched me so deeply. I feel it, and Ive never read a poem that could make me feel as much as what this ...

Hey hey! :) Im really beginning to see what you meant by "show-dont tell" :smt001 thanks for the advice :smt001 I really enjoyed this story, and sensed the urgency for ...

I find this work very amusing because it was written a long time ago and I had completely forgotten about it. The name goes with the is quite disturbing. Ive ...

hey man :) You're not untalented :)just thought Id tell you :) writing is a place where you dont have to be good :) it loves you anyway :) DONT ...

hehe I loved this :) you got the bad-ass of Vince down perfectly! it was an awesome situation, especially since it was about books ;). I thouroughly enjoyed it, and ...

Thanx guys! I really appreciate the help and tips :). I'll fix it and play around a bit more.. Im so glad I've found this site. My confidence in what ...

This is a short story. It could possibly be built on and made longer. Just playing with an idea.. She was here every day, Perfecting. Pushing harder, to reach higher ...

This is my first time ever posting something :). I'm a bit nervous. I feel like I'm sending a my child off to his/her first day of school.. This could ...