PandorasChild

Hello hello :) You asked so nicely, and in honour of review Sunday, here I am! I read the preface and the previous two chapters. Out of all of them ...

Hello there fellow Saffa :) kiff piece you have here bru ;) ok enough with the colloquialism, this was good :) a few fast paced moments you've caught and displayed ...

Hello Hello :) I liked this, the idea of a female assassin, and also the adoptive evil relationship with her father who makes her do things because she doesn't know ...

This is an assignment for school, it has to be exactly 100 words including the title. I did this really quickly, just and idea :) my grammar and basically everything ...

This was wonderful. Your use of words is fantastic. I had to read it slowly and thoroughly, which made me appreciate it so much more. I especially liked the origami ...

Hello :) So I don't do poetry either, so this may be a little like the blind leading the blind, but ill try my best :) I kindve understood the ...

hey hey :) ok i liked your idea :) sort of fantasy version of interracial love, but the angel/demon factor makes it that much more interesting. I think it has ...

Hello titan :) I like it for some one of your age :) you've got a very interesting story with a lot of potential. When ever one of your characters ...

Hello :) it was very.. Pretty. And colourful.. Purples and flowers and words like "bright" and "explode." It didn't however create much of an emotional response, I wasn't interested to ...

This is another that probably wont make much sense, another that needs much work. It is sort of a huge metaphorical, symbolic piece that conveys a relationship with some one ...

HELLO :) wow. I loved the length, its just pure emotion, just pure food to feed off of. I devoured it, and like every good thing in this world, it ...

OK so I haven't been on YWS for a while, good to be back! This is just something I played with on a Sunday afternoon. Its extremely raw, and needs ...

Hello there :) Haha I'm just going to sneak in and leave you something small, your first few posts and everyone has (lovingly??) Bombarded you with novels of reviews! :) ...

Hey hey! So I really enjoyed this, everyone has basically nitpicked it to shreds so I'm not going to add much more, something that I LOVED was the colour :) ...

Hey Blackbird! Wow.. This poen really hit me, I really felt it. My wrists were turning themselves inside out, your imagery left me breathless, Had to read it a few ...