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Haha wonderful! :) I loved it :) My favourite part of both parts was how.. Non chalant it was. How Bill explains how death was exactly what he expected it ...

Aaaaahahahahahahaha xD "CEO of BP Corporations." :) brilliant. I loved your characters, I loved Harold and the relationship between the two main characters seemed extremely real and relateable, did yo

Jagged, poetry isn't my forte, but when I read yours I feel it in my bones, and I want to swim in it. I am so sure there is so ...

It blows my mind how many people LOVE math but still feel they can relate :) I HATE MATH with a passion that would make that movie Braveheart look like ...

Thank you for your reviews! :) There is no more, that story is unfortunantly finished, but maybe in hindsight it would be interesting to look at an expansion :)

Thank you so much for your helpful reviews :)

Hello there :) Haha I think you have a good few reviews, so I'll spare you the essay, but that's a kick ass little piece you have there. Its good ...

Thanks for your review! Ill definitely go back and fix the points pointed out! :)

Its self explanatory, I had the urgency to identify what it was, well what it is for me, what that feeling might be for you guys, is it the same? ...

This wont make much sense, but its sort of a trail of thought in my brain. It needs work, but I need to do something with it to move forward ...

Hello there :) Poetry isn't really my strong point but what i can say is that the structure was very fitting and slightly scatty :) which made me nervous. very ...

I really do thouroughly enjoy reading you work :) The awkward asphyxiation - like pretending not to notice parental coitus over the mashed potatoes - made me fidget in my ...

Hey Hey :) This was good and although I didnt quite understand (sorry, in a bit of a rush) I caught the basic feeling. I adore this.. "Remember that time ...

Good Morning :) I enjoyed this although I was not too sure what a Schmetterling was? But after reading the previous review, ping! it is in fact a butterfly :) ...

hey man! awesome piece you have here! very lighthearted way to look at a very heavy topic. I enjoyed looking at it your way. dude! change your verb 'got' in ...