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Re: This One Time at Band Camp
I think some dialogue with the cat in the tree would enhance it. It would give a chance for more of a theme to develop.
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Great excersise to improve description!
That really was quite a great exercise I felt my description skills grow in just a few attempts.
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Silhouette
Liesonlies, first of all, if you are going to be blunt, be blunt with constructive criticism,for example, say what could be made better. Simply saying you have a distaste for ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Silhouette
"glance me"--should be glance to me
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Silhouette
(Guitar Intro) When I wake, I see your face, In the night, By the light. Your eyes are crystal, Lips are roses, In the night, By the light. I dream ...
Aug 4, 2011