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i cant believe some of u say eragon and harry potter are amongst the worst books, theyre some of D BEST BOOKS ever to be written. Anyway, I don't read ...

To be honest, I enjoyed the STORY. But that's the problem with this piece. A lot of story, and you simply skim over the descriptions and details. Things that you ...

All in all, I really enjoyed this. However, this doesn't make any sense and doesn't fit in with the rest of the context: Her hair fanned out behind her as ...

I have one word: WOW. When are you going to become an official writer? When you decide to do so, please contact me! If this was done in 20 minutes, ...

Er...sorry....forgot the topic. Here: topic49731

Hi there Phantom! I don't know yet whether I am entering your contest, I think I will if I have time :). Listen, can you pls pls pls (x100000000000) review ...

Hey there Rosey! I hope you don't mind an inexperienced user of YWS to comment on your story, but I had to review cause so far, this is one of ...

I must say you did a really good job( I'm still novice but...) and I am really lloking forward to seeing more of your work! Please, continue writing! By the ...

is it better now? P.S. Sorry for leaving the same ending, dont have any other ideas :S

ok tnx vry much...ill try to improve what i can :)

Aware of the situation, aware of the wingless creation, as all greedily descend, to give life a dramatic end, the trigger is pulled, the signal activated, everyone is conscious, that ...

It is a very good story..however, as Griffinkeeper pointed out, I got a bit bored as I continued to read, to be honest. However, that is just my humble opinion, ...

Goodbye James gazed in awe as the planes soared over his house, swooping so low he could almost see the pilot’s face. He had always been enthralled by warfare. His ...

k ill c what i can do :)

tnx wordsmith for your comments :)