Palip

Barren. Mile upon castrated mile divulged the arid, infertile land. It was an area of deprivation, a purgatory for the foolish or wretched who stumbled upon my realm. A terrain ...

Hi there, Palip to review. I'm going to review as I go along, I hope you don't mind. So, here goes: Athena's silvery loom clicked back and forth and Calypso ...

All I can say is...WOW. One of the most original and ingenous ideas I have ever seen written down. I actually smiled at the W.R.I.T.E.R.S. definition of each letter...however the ...

Sometimes life doesn’t turn out the way we’d like it to. Sometimes we just have to grab our happiness where we can get it. The thing is, there were only ...

I'm going to review this as I go along, so I could at least try to give you a thorough review. I know that Kaf covered most of the points, ...

I'm just writing this to tell you this is really interesting. I was hooked. Literally. I suppose that all the nitpicks have been covered, so I'll just say one last ...

This has to be one of the best stories on YWS, if not THE best. Admittedly, I have not read all the works on the site, but this just makes ...

thanks a million Pink :)

I really, really need your reviews on this one. I was supposed to write a descriptive essay on the beach. I did my best, BUT I can't tell you how ...

To Sionarama; you said "If I could, I'd delete it." This was perhaps the reason I'm writing this review. First of all, your story is NOT boring. It just needs ...

Wow..this is amazing. To be honest, I have not read Part I and Part II, but if I may judge from this one alone, they are..intriguing to say the least. ...

I really like this piece. Usually, I'm not into stories which involve the "modern" world (taking into account your story, I am referring to the cars) but this one is ...

Very good story; I like it, especially the way you indicatd that the 2 "seperate" stories are linked at the end. Thanks for uploading such a story; hope that you'll ...

Hi Hannah :). I have finally finished my piece, I don't know whether it's 100% showing or not, but I've tried my best :). So here are the details: It's ...

Great piece of writing...only mistake was : "Elizabeth is first to speak, “Thank you.” ". This sentence must be rephrased: "Elizabeth was the first to speak". Otherwise, this is a ...