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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 4

    Rose stood facing the kitchen stove. She whistled, the happy notes jarring the uncomfortable communication barrier. Tension rose. Eugene observed every detail of the situation. His mother seemed to be

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Nothing

    Well, this is...long. I suppose I'd better sit back and relax :P. Here goes: Refus was far too good of a friend to let go Hmm...I'm not too sure about ...

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 7

    Hello there, Palip to review. I actually read this piece before deciding to criticise (reason being I found it short enough for a little leisurely reading). I apologise to you ...

    Nov 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 3

    Eugene swung his legs across the bed, squinting as the bright rays of the sun brushed the sleep from his eyes. Daylight provided just enough time for recuperation before night ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Raindrops to Ashes

    Hello there MorningMist, Palip to review for you :). If you don't mind, I'll be reviewing this as I go along, so pardon my pointing out any "mistakes" resolved later ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 2

    Thanks...High. Or should that be Harry?

    Oct 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 2

    Without exception, dreams descended upon Eugene that night, paying homage to the thorny vines of terror encapsulating his heart. Clad in thin linen pyjamas the hue of a deep, drowning ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 2

    Without exception, dreams descended upon Eugene that night, paying homage to the thorny vines of terror encapsulating his heart. Clad in thin linen pyjamas the hue of a dark, deep, ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 1

    Thank a lot to the three of you, rest assured your reviews are much appreciated :)

    Sep 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Three in with Souls Chapter 1

    The indigenous Romanian aircraft initiated in 1937 is known as the IAR 80. This low-wing, monoplane fighter aircraft was primarily produced as a private venture. IAR were tenacious in their ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Here There Be Dragons - 4

    Ok so...sorry, I just couldn't resist putting in a little review. I am totally your number one follower. Your work is so unique, so original, so different. It's amazingly refreshing ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1

    I STRONGLY recommend you stop this. I'm sorry, I just can't keep writing a review for every excellent piece of writing you create. You waste too much of my time. ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Stormbringer - 2

    So, hello once again Ranger xP. I am aware that you have abandoned this project. However, since you pointed out that this chapter "sucked" I decided to check it out. ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Stormbringer - 1

    Hi there RangerHawk :)). I was randomly browsing through members' pages (yes I know, shame on me for procrastinating when I should be studying), when I came across your page ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The King and the Magician.

    haha MY was this horrible :P. As the others pointed out, an excellent job including most (if not all) of the clichés one expects to find in such a story. ...

    Mar 4, 2011


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