Palantalid

how about......."Yes, we sue (but we aren't your lawyers)"?

Just wanted to pull your attention to the verse: "Death came swiftly that Midsummer's night; I doubt such a young girl could put up much a fight." The last line ...

Heather.....welcome to this hidey little hole. You'll find that we are all a big little family that's always quarelling, playing games or innovating big new projects. The whole essence to ...

Well....if anybody sees this can they tell me whether i've rewritten it properly? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....?

Awfully helpful, Jabs. I appreciate it whole heartedly. Will make corrections immediately.

My Muse be Cenci! She crosses my bridge when the nights are such, And nestled is her head in the warmth of her hands That were cold on the day ...

I have no idea whether this is a serious story or not but if those tweaks of humor were intentional then i have nothing to complain about. in fact i ...

bravo.....yes, Blake's 'Songs of Innocence and Experience' did help with the flow of thoughts and no, there are absolutely no lines copied.........mostly because i've never read the Songs. but i ...

'The Best of O. Henry'...........he's a genius.

Ars Poetica And when we were but children of our own paradise, Did we not hear such lovely sounds as pierce the night When we waked to see the stars ...

< this point of veiw is only for one post> Even as Arriana and Lucy stepped into the cold mist of the night, where danger hung like a sleeping bat ...

oh YWS, smite me but i'll skip the punctuation. my god, the lists. call me inactive if you want, but it's true that this place is surely somewhere to belong. ...

forgive me if i'm wrong, but doesn't 'to cross the Rubicon' mean to put all to stake and just carry on....or something like that. well, i had forgotten the phrase ...

ha ha....i won't spoil the surprise so don't worry. but nobody seems to be trying to give a reply except good old heather. maybe you should, give away the answers. ...

jolly good, to hear all this. can't escape without a hearty thank you and of course i'll look into the whole thing. i wont be taking it off though. if ...