Palantalid

For some far-flung Eurydice Now when I leave my doorstep, I shan't look into that waiting eye. Peeping from beyond the curtain, it is by some pain-wrought passion lit. But ...

I owe you this, at least..... Rickety thing this, but it has some really thought provoking lines. It makes me think of a world of different scenarios and possible poems. ...

Well Kit did get the most important points but I just had to tell you that the poem had a distinct feeling of movement, it had the energy of flowing ...

Nomad I. Wayward Cycles The sun outlasts the sunny days, to scorch the winter grass And the grass falls like shadows down the slope When youthful charioteers return to the ...

I'm looking at this as a fiction tip/discussion and though it's an important point for a reader or critic to know, maybe it's just as important for writers. In the ...

All right, I'm going to take a guess. There were a lot of lines I tried too swallow but I ended up licking them and putting them back on the ...

Haha.....it's no doubt that for some writers procrastination is one of the nastiest evils around. I think my personal problem is that I just can't get myself to sit down......I ...

Under the Bridges I wept my way to a wonderland And at the gates took a weary stand. Those children lost that came behind, I sang to them of masters ...

Alright, I've read it so far and I think the voice is great. Omnipresent? The second account was from Annabelle's point of veiw wasn't it? And yes, I think the ...

Adrian, that was a very enjoyable read. Just a priliminary suggestion- the lines are a bit tedious and i almost missed that it rhymed altogether. So, in case you have ...

gadi's The Road Under. in case some one pries through my stuff...i'd like it if they stayed to more recent works as my previous ones were quite inexperienced and i'm ...

At the Gates of Babylon At the gates of Babylon, in days long done and gone, In the land between the rivers, where the noble city quivers, The skeleton comes ...

"Who will gaurd the gaurds themselves?" -Juvenal In this insecurity we turn our pacing circles, that is born in the dim lights of our minds when we lavish our thoughts ...

If anything at all I'd just suggest that the contrast between the really bright stars (they would look like a nice little galaxy by themselves) and the brownish planet (I'm ...

I do like the idea.....and I'm sure this will improve the quality of works by a margin as people will make sure that what they're posting is worth the points ...