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*I think I've found something I'm really comfortable with. This is a lyrical narrative. Narrative in theory but with lyrical tones. I bet it's not something commonly done before. Ermm....Longfellow ...

Alright, I thought this peice had some great imagery and what I think is was symbolism. But this is not like any other peice I've read of yours. S1 -Well, ...

BBB, I'm starting to like this, and like Jabber, I like the second ending better. A suggestion: "Oh my gosh. I just related my life to food. That’s all I ...

Robin The scene was worse than he had expected. Vampire blood evaporated in the sun and a row of bodies stood inside a cordon, with officers standing over them and ...

Golly, yes! The something lake at Innisfree. And she died at the house where Yeats had once lived near Chalcot Square or something. Have to hand it to you. I ...

This was a wonderful peice, Ted, I mean Ed :wink: Unfortunately I just don't get many of the references as I've never read Plath or Hughes. I only know the ...

The Fosse Grim Returns to Water We float, my dear, we float. And the sleeping caddisfly ventures Ever nearer to the disturbed water. On a mountain of misery, we Built ...

Robin When Robin got up the next morning and found himself lying in the gutter, his shirt filthy and his muscles aching, he did not remember how he had gotten ...

Salutations, rear-admiral sir! Alright, April 1. I do not like Eliot the person. But as a poet, he's rather good. As for April, it is cruel to some, at least ...

Thank you, booky and Rieda. I'm glad that these were not totally underestimated. And congratulations bkwrm, for catching that grammatical. I was just checking whether anyone would notice. No, really, ...

Right I edited stanza 4 according to you b'bob. Or could I call you bebop? However, after I had written it, I thought that the last line might sound like ...

(The first one may be a narrative, but I found these two in a notebook and so I'm posting them together in Dramatic) Convenient Interruption "That does it! That bumbling ...

This was originally just a little fancy that entered my mind a while ago. You see, I sometimes like to enter a poetry forum and then read peices that are ...

Well, Vernon asked me once whether I could take a look at his 'Chasing Rainbows' but I never actually got around to it. I'm also not very good at prose. ...

Kylan, I have to say that I've read some of your poetry and I think I quite like the style. I can't put my finger on everything but I like ...