Palantalid

Mmmhhhmmmm.......you know I wouldn't do this to you....except that this one yeilded zero reveiws. Surprising, so I have to ask- is there something wrong in the poem or the language ...

If you ever come by a flipping sweet line in a poem or a verse or any short 'un there's nothing better than sharing it :) . Here's quotes from ...

My present favourite. Robert Jordan writes in a genre that's been quite sucked up (not dry yet) but his work is so sweeping that you half forget it is drawing ...

I second for LoTF. It's got a style of its own and the allusions used don't need research to get through. But I agree it's a bit dry.....

It's come to where I post two at a time. Trying to hold the post-review ratio fit. I hope you'll forgive me, but I haven't been too regular. This is ...

Gadi. I have to tell you that even if I'm being a desperate stock market analyst, your poems are getting on a more tone of hopelessness....more idleness, less creative. It's ...

Oh goody. I've found out what it is I like about your poems...they're the feel good variety. I'm in a good mood today so I'll congratulate you for doing what ...

Aerial Lights They told me if the zodiacs were in the sky, thus, there would be lights. We looked at the moon the way we looked at mother when we ...

Very nice. I'll try to be thorough so forgive nitty-pickies. It seems to have lasted for months, this one. A quick line by line>>> Branding very nice title. fits well ...

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Haha...I had favorited this, to critique later, but forgot about it. Anyway, better late then never. Onwards... Well, the numbness portrayed in the first two lines just tells me why ...

*One from a rotting notebook* Grown Grass Goes Down (1) Living on the noon-baked grass, "Coffee?" "No," they say, "I'll pass." Flask so tight, liquid warm. Pop and open, steamy ...

Experiencing bugs. All the posts are stretching away endlessly to the right and the Post Reply link refused to open. But this isn't the place for that. To the critique ...

Thanks awfully for your comments. They're well taken as I'm still searching for my groove. Lil: The rythm was well, non-existant. I was trying to use intelligent line-breaks.....like you know, ...