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Looking good, Andy, Clo. So people play T.T. in NZ too, huh? Intriguing. And they really do blow bubbles. It's really good to know that all those people on here ...

Firstly-- very intriguing name. It sounds German but I don't know if I would bet on it. Secondly, some of the lines-- The first two paras had some good images, ...

McHelpfulPants, this is great stuff! The poem obviously comes from someone with a great sense of creativity and observation. It's at once absurd and intelligent. Anyone reading this will obviously ...

Hey JC, first off- peanut's suggestions were intelligent. I agree with them. Secondly, woah. As far as your brand of narratives go, you've made a great jump in quality. This ...

Impressions- First read- I thought it was a little too bored. The first part was so reminiscent of people who write poetry because they are bored. Second reading- I was ...

For Kylan's minimalist contest. First prose posted. Hah, kept it a secret so far! Spared you some pain maybe. Do read and leave any kind of comment as long as ...

This is the overload you've been waiting for- April 7 In April, I am walking past my house again. I am looking up one floor to the first floor where ...

April 5 I am walking now. There's a star and a half in the sky and judging by the parallax as I walk a mile, it's really close to here. ...

Okay firstly, don't know if I can give conductive criticism (intriguing idea though!!) but hope to give constructive criticism. :) Right, I thought it was pretty simple-themed poem, clarity enough. ...

Thanks, Kal. I think I can make it yet. Become active again. This isn't the place for this, but over the last three months I gave two important exams and ...

I'm not really writing a poem a day. I'm writing one poem over a month. The title is tentative. I really do fancy writing long poems. Anyway, it's my first ...

Mrs. Moth, you are So beautiful. Your tender, smooth Skin is like temptation on the wing. Your large, dark eyes draw me And your long, pale waif-like legs are poised ...

40 Winks There are days when I consider my heartbeats with a kind of detachedness that I see in the eyes of cows and half-sleeping dogs. I should sleep more ...

I don't know if I'm missing something but even though the portfolios are very organised now-- how do I see whether a member has posted a piece recently without being ...

I don't think this made too much sense to anyone who hasn't read Eliot's poem. I did read Elly but can't connect. You might not be trying to but I ...