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Zackster! This is a indeed an evocative poem (not sure about provocative). Your imagery stands out and the treatment to a subject that appears to be not uncommon (at least ...

Zaddie, the indomitable spirit in this poem is very endearing. If you could only preserve this without plunging headfirst into cliches, it would be great. The stubborn defiance of 'my ...

ca va, kool? Just an aside: About the two lines at the end of verse one: I like the association of clouds and fantasy and while you tried to bring ...

Woozey! Great job on making this a very playful poem and yeah, it does have the effect of bringing amusement. This puts me in a fix as to what I ...

Hey Yote Flakes! Well. Well well well. My first prose review since years and I have the nerve to pick this up. This definitely tops your list of experimentations on ...

Heya cyber... I'll get right to business okay? Well, firstly, I know how much a favourite poem really matters to any poet. It is symbolic of your present state, your ...

Good one this, Penelope. I'll try to give some constructive bird-food, but I know how it can be difficult to chop at a favourite. From the very beginning, what struck ...

Mirror-Washing Trailing down the looking-glass in clear rivers of tap water, I feel fear begin in my own eyes, stung by sweat like the rain outside and just as wet ...

Bubbah! The theme of the poem, I'm sure you have to not as worn as some theme's but is still a universally experienced one. But there is a huge scope ...

aloha, alohajuice! This here poem was recommended by Miss Mars, and I'm glad I got to it. About the "Vistana" mention-- google only shows it as hotels in Penang, Kuala ...

This is a great inspection of poetry and writing. It'll definitely come to me the next time I have a pen raised above paper.

Dreaming of Sleeping I sometimes wonder, on winter Sunday afternoons, when the washed plates dry quickly with the spoons so cold, clustered in air devoid of warmth and red; why ...

FamousAuthor, this is fizzy!! Good job, I mean. Actually, It seems a little short of fizz. Free verse alright, but it's a little slow. The metaphor doesn't seem to permeate ...

sopher, this is rather good stuff. Your phrasing and imagery were great, but some of the lines sounded a bit worn, if you know what I mean. For example, "but ...

Hey, iCarlyfan! Firstly, this was an awesomely put story (why is it in dramatic, and not in Narrative?) I don't care if it's from a video game or not. You ...