Palantalid

hey, that reminded me of some poem i read before......like, well it did remind me of something. hmmmm.....i know this souunds strange but does the voice in this poem sounds ...

aaaaaaaaaah splendid. i used to do this with my shoes. it was an impressive idea. great class. i always find these types of stories startalingly amusing. maybe i could ask ...

Kitty15 thanks for the critique. it really helpful. the part about pace increasing, i think that was the most useful. i'll use it for sure though i'm not sure whether ...

Keep smiling, I tell you, my friend, Keep smiling, I tell you, my love. Your smile will wear out the sun eventually, It will bleach the world to purity again, ...

Well this is the no rhymes poem I've been threatening to post. I liked the topic but I think the sentence structures need your help, dear reader. ------- My soul ...

*this was written on a personal request.* Robin had hardly wanted to talk to Anderson in person. He was the random factor in the whole plan. Robin was uncomfortable about ...

well i thought i needed to clarify a little bit, maybe my plst was highly confusing. well firstly Robin is not a 'mysterious avian' (i thought i mentioned hes a ...

*sorry i received feed back and i guess i must explain myself. its my first SB and i dont even know what god moding is. and i edited so that ...

im editting to give time(according to advice) and im shifting the date of the meeting. please clarify, i didnt even know there was a word called god moding

i tried to make this an epic but things went awry- the same faults- the metre, the forced rhymes, O well, hope you like the story. if there are any ...

Robin looked deep into the sky. It had depth that could shame an ocean. He had been put in the environment since birth........he could see beyond physical things.....see the omens, ...

that was nice. i mean it had the emotions clearly and you knew how to say it all. it gives the feeling that whoever its for will be impressed. is ...

*Hope i didnt miss anybody while listing the charectars. I thought that the story was going in all directions. you dont mind me tying all the ends toghether do you? ...

*Yup, its late in the story. Yup, i dont know about american schools and yup, id like you to let me join. And heres the actual text* It was red, ...

My first entry into a SB........I hope i can keep this up...... Name- Robin Helsing (just sticking to ancestral name, dont get the wrong idea) Age-14 in physical time but ...