Palantalid

well, i normally relate the meaning of the poem in the last line or so. i've always thought that if you write something about your own fancies it's often not ...

It helps us to remember, That sometimes when we're broken, We can peice ourselves together, And forget what has been spoken. Dawnless words, senseless birds, Take hope that our race ...

On Winter’s Aging Oh! Winter slows the watered sea, And aged snow white brings to thee, Crystal white strands of my hair, My wrinkled smile does smooth my care, Like ...

brilliant, i liked this very much. there were a few things that i didn't quite get- or more specifically, who's the yes man and is the use of yes 'men' ...

Hmmm.....i haven't read your poetry before, so i don't know whether this was an intended effect, a subconscious one or maybe an idea that just pops in random heads at ...

nice job, neat job........i presume there will be a continuatuon. it's a shame this hasn't received any reveiws so far. i'd say the theme was great, and i hope to ...

shelley? shelley? .........anybody? o well, i just find the whole romantic era of poetry really interesting- lots of imagery......i havent come to the stage where i really appreciate the long ...

just seeing if i cant halp a little bit- firstly it sounds like you have been writing poetry for a good bit of timme. and thats a good sign. look ...

Homecoming O ye stars, obstructed by the dust of the forsaken city I call home, Thou who glorify in the hazy murk of the city’s nighttime, Assured lights, mourning the ...

i dont know whether honest star is a person or idea or erm.. never mind i dont know but the flow and the whole poem was really well written. the ...

are you sure? no actual motive except a wish to write? that's good. it shows, you know, the way some writers, or poets more like, just innocently jot something down ...

india at that time was a really complicated place. there were multiple castes involved and everybody generalised and discriminated horribly. of course that's all changed now and only scars remain ...

it seems that the unconscious is indeed important to our day to day life. it is more than true, i think, that the decisions we make are subjective to our ...

i found myself suddenly caught off balance by this topic. so i'll say something short and i hope useful. isn't it possible to prove something mathematically? aren't there truths in ...