Palantalid

Coffee Stain On the roads, I pass by them and they glance, look me over, and I don't have a chance to hide that muddy cloud, that bleary mark of ...

Firstly, 33 because that's the age at which Jesus was nailed to the cross and got himself pierced by the spear of destiny. It's also the age at which Hart ...

When you have lived three and thirty years and find yourself more than twice as old as I am now, ask yourself how well you have moved on after my ...

Kylan, I thought I'd start by making a quick list of similes/comparisons of any sort- >peaches...like Adam's apples >skin hanging off his bones, like windless sails >underbelly/of the veranda sags ...

Hilarious. Totally!

I'm afraid this isn't stream of consciousness (which is supposed to read in the same forms and sequences in which we think). I guess the fact that the verses got ...

Winnie, I enjoyed this poem quite bit. Though it was rather simple and I have little to go by, I'd say you have all the necessities to continue writing good ...

Chair and Chamber Thrash, thrash against your bounds throwing your head back to see who is pulling you up out of the muck, the gas, the ache, the simple chair ...

Vanadis, despite your having only started on poetry recently, the fact that you haven't jumped in with a poem that blares with crudeness and lack of thought gives me great ...

That's right, a little more ingenuity in fantasy is wanting. A brief look at the skeletons for some of the races: 1)Wise, noble, pure, ancient Ones 2)Humans (apart from the ...

Let the Number be X Of all our open wonders, the one that wounds us most – how this relentless Music outlives us and our ghost. And all the unknown ...

Sorry this is a little late... Yeah, I won't do any nitpicks because too may people have gone into those already. Just a few pointers and comments, okay? Firstly, about ...

Hey Gunner! Regardless of whether you support Arsenal, I'm sticking this name on you, okay? I'm not going to go into nitpicks as you'll realise Storm_Bringer's spotted all the little ...

Heather! Really nice to see a poem of your's again. I must say that it's really nice to see a refreshingly simple list poem on here. I enjoyed the conversational ...

Confession Booth: Ahem. Well, there's a reason why I hadn't done this till now. You see, though I read quite a few works every time I visit YWS, I sometimes ...