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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: A Murderer

    A good yarn! I love the narration. You have an engaging writing style. And the characterization was really great and I can empathize with the character. However, the ending was ...

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    @ bluedragon Wow, kewl! Are you a Filipino?

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Stranger is Watching

    . The silent stranger watching in the crowd--- there one moment and gone the next. A shadowy figure outside her window--- there one moment and gone the next. The stealthy ...

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Death of Promethius Jebediah Wulf III

    This is good. There's an inner ryhthm, making the poem more pleasurable to read even if the theme is a bit gory.

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Roses Have Wilted

    What a very powerful imagery. It is vivid and vibrant.

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    PadrePio from Manila, a few minutes old here in YWS. :D Great site.

    Aug 25, 2009


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov