Pacific_Sky14

I believe this should be under "random thought bubbles that appear on an off throughout the day" genre...but it's not sooo.... please review! Yes, tell me this is a strange ...

This is a poem right? So what you can do is separate the lines more because it looks like two paragraphs. :) Oh, and it doesss sound like you're talking ...

Wow, this is very awesome. No, I really did love it. It was full of emotion and a harsh sense of reality- like loveless had said. If this is a ...

I am not very good in dramatic poetry so I thought I'd just try it out. I wrote this thinking about the setting, it will clear things up a bit ...

This is a good picture to use. I didn't know it would be your little sister, but it is capturing of the topic because the color tone you used and ...

Wow, you are very talented to draw and paint..and color these pieces! There must have been a lot of patience in doing these artworks. I really love the first one! ...

It's good! :) Let's just say if you had in some color-it would look very realistic! :) Nice job^.6

CHORUS: 'cause the rain stains on your face everyone can see where you've been crying and maybe they don't know it when your lying too many excuses the ties are ...

I agree with Durrie! :) Two what? I don't really know haiku's, but it's alright!!^>^

It's about a famous girl being torn apart by lies. She just wants the guy to realize everything she's going through;to maybe get him back for who she really is. ...

Wow, this is very good! ^.^ I liked the chorus. you should definitely keep on writing lyrics!!

That is very good! I couldn't draw that, that's amazing! The only thing that could fix is the nose. It just looks a bit too big? Other than that, Neyteri ...

My name is Alice I live in a palace. I have no real friends. My life is no end. Ny name is Alice I’m being proposed, but him-I can’t kiss. ...

Very creative :) Ha ha. I love the first verse. There is just the word "Dominationg" and it doesn't fit. It sounds forced. A very good tactic I use to ...

I love it! It's just the grammar. Be sure to use spelling check before posting :) And Nice job -keep writing more lyrics. Oh, and it doesn't sound like a ...