Pacific_Sky14

"The curving, desert pathis one that few willingly risk.The thick, warm airand the hot, blazing suncould driva a man insane,if he doesn't die first." Wow, you used neat-O adjectives here. ...

Ya know, that's what happens to me! I hate it when the happens...another hour of waiting..errgh ~Skyy.

I rated! :) Ok, so you have a good rythym. You used the adjetives well in this poem. "The erosion batters into itself like fire. Fighting fire." This part I ...

Oh no, she doesn't have a nose! ^.^ The nose is pretty easy to draw...the shoulders are a bit small and the hand. Over all, I like it! Gosh now ...

This is my first tiger drawing, seriously! I love baby white tigers! I didn't have plenty of time to work on this so it's kind of rough? :) but the ...

"The sand seems grey with desire and as my happiness is rusted away" the sand being gray with desire doesn't sound right, why not say something different and you can ...

Wow, "You see that look when she looks in your eyes Well it’s not the same as it is in mine" That was my favorite line! For writing songs, you ...

I think the face is a bit wide which makes the eyes too wide. I like it. Oh my gosh, I loved New Moon, didn't you? I'm Team Jacob but ...

Wow, that speaks very deep. It is very good yet emotional. I don't know...but it kind of creeps me out, but not in a bad way. The lines were very ...

"“Just a seconded ill call you,” but then you’re not there" I tihnk you meant to type, "second" :) I like your song. It's cute. :D My fave lines are ...

This was amazing. I liked the whole idea to it. There's not much to say, but if I knew what how the song went I wouldn't have to tell you ...

The poem flows very fluently and I like it so much! "I don’t know how I strayed from her, I never, ever meant to leave, I want to be her, ...

Wow, that is very good! I couldn't draw people like, that! Let me tell you, when it comes to drawing little children I screw up big time. Ha ha, I ...

I like these lyrics! There is a complete story so that's great. :] "I forget all the months that past in the summer" The word "past" is "passed" I'm not ...

Thanks everyone for sharing your opinions. LUUUURRVVVVVE ya! ^.6 Thanks to you, I started drawing better. ~Skyy.