Pacific_Sky14

That is very good! In seventh grade, I would have never wrote something like that:) That will be in my head all day now, :D Very nice. And thanx for ...

I'll put on my thick, velvet coat Or I'll get sick from the cold, as rain pours down. On the door step, I'm a kite in the wind, Warm into ...

Wow, this is really interesting. I made me wondering what would next... then it ended. It was really nice, you should continue it! If you want to, anyway. :) And ...

I liked your story. I found something etchy in your story. You describe everything and it creates clear imagery and that is good with the details you use. :D I ...

This was a dream I had last night. It seemed much cooler in my mind...heheh. After I woke up I immediately started jotting down the words. It's like a pressed ...

Sitting at the tide’s bare feet You did a fantastic job on this poetry!!! :D This was really good and it was nice that you added a character known to ...

The sun seems to be hiding today, again. It's the spring in Seattle. The rain pours on my face as I look up to find the sun trying to hide ...

They would know that she knew about them if she did. Then They would come for her. And once They got her, poor, little Macey would have wished she’d kept ...

This was super funny! I love how you always have a funny sentence at the end of your short stories. YOu did wonderful, haha! :elephant: :mrgreen:

Wow, this i really good. The last sentence was perfect ! I really liked how you explained your feelings of fear. I even liked how the enemy was your clothes ...

I really liked this one. The only thing that bothered me was the first paragraph, or the second and last sentence. Other than that, I think your work was well ...

I love this drawing. I'm an artist and only one thing I saw bothered me...just one!:D You can barely tell her head is slanted. Other than that, you did lovely!!! ...

I really like how you introduced us to the the story. I love how you put in the right amount of details. The only thing that bothers me is that ...

The beginning paragraphs a little, confused me on setting... But I really liked how you put in how he felt during when he was afraid or powerless in powerful situations. ...

I love my realistic- fiction story called Saving in Reythoria. Three friends and their allies go on an adventure to finally burn the Map of The Universe and bring humans ...